Monday, 4 March 2013

This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013 I have posted it just as it I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given,so that throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my writing ,I will post my learning goal from this soon.                                                                                                            
                                                                                                                                                             Years ago in a village so far far away where there was children disappearing without a clue no one knew what was happening to the children.Until a boy called Benson discovered that there was a witch whose name was bianca who lives up in the high mountains.She takes children’s and she puts a spell on the parents to forget and sleeps at day time.                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                                                 Every night the witch would come to this little village and start taking kids one by one until it was time for the sun to rise.Parents would say to the village people or their neighbours and say “I just had the strangest dream ever” and the villagers replied “what happened”.                                                              
                                                                                                                                                                  A witch has taken kids that I don’t know of.Then Benson said “that was no dream that just happened last night”. I was watching her as I was going home for our lovely beach I quickly sneaked behind and follow her as she went back to the mountains she takes kids every night that is why there is hardly anymore children.                                                                                                                                                                  
                                                                                                                                                                 “If you want to save your kids quickly grabbed a weapon and come with me and I will show you where this which is taking the children.We will strike at dawn and kill the witch once and for all so we can live in peace.So as they marched throw the forest up hill and as they were getting closer and closer benson said “wait we will camp here”.                                                                                                        
                                                                                                                                                                     Then the next day benson told the village people wake up it’s time to strike and of they went up the mountain to the witches house slow and steady so we don’t wake her up. Then with a rash they quickly tried to kill her as the were killing her benson said to the man with the fire in his to “burn her quickly”. Benson ran down a dungeon with a list of names that was to so which kid goes to which family and set the children free and they lived peaceful again and never had trouble to deal with anymore.
                                                     THE END.

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