Friday, 22 February 2013

Touch-show not tell

I was panting,puffing and sweating like it was raining. Huffing and puffing to pass a medium size oval rugby ball . Breathing heavily trying to catch my breath from all that running. Touch was awesome I can’t wait to go to touch again next week.


  1. What a great effort first up Lave. I can see you know what I mean by 'show not tell" Keep adding in that interesting detail that enhances your writing.
    Mrs Nua

  2. Sup Lave

    That was a cool writing. I like how you showed but not tell. I like your interesting facts

    Keep up the good the work.


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