This is a record of my learning during my time at Pt. England School.
What a great effort first up Lave. I can see you know what I mean by 'show not tell" Keep adding in that interesting detail that enhances your writing.Mrs Nua
Sup LaveThat was a cool writing. I like how you showed but not tell. I like your interesting facts Keep up the good the work.
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